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Meh, Someone likes to steal jokes from the Half Life Full Life Consequences series.

drodZILiA responds:

Well, that was a huge inspiration for this, but I don't think we really stole many jokes, care to tell us which ones we "stole?"

I've already noticed the motorcycle thing was quite ripped off, so if that is what you are talking about, no need to remind me.

Ha.

Asperchu made me laugh.

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Fun

Interesting game with great art! BUT its quite glitchy. Also, the turn off audio option doesn't work.

Love the Africa Dudes reference!

Talking bout cream cheese sandwiches.

Beautiful!

I love it. The dedication this must have taken just gives me chills!

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Ha!

Love the hairy nipple. THe whole naked time reminds me of the end of one of the Potter Puppet Palls. Kinda looks like Dumbledor.

dommi-fresh responds:

ha ha ha potter puppet pals is awesome i haven't seen it in ages though good call mate

:D

I have a shirt just like his.

Super Magic Advice Time with Squee

First, work on your facial anatomy. Even if its an anime style piece you should still work out face and necks stuff in some form. All of the hair that isn't right on her skull looks wonky because of the angle. So the neck and hair need to work together.
Next, the twist of her pelvis just looks flat from how you attached the suspenders to the belt. If you do want to leave them where they are, I'd recommend modifying her rear end and the shading of the skirt. As well as adding a few folds to the skirt and defining her butt in your line work.
The arms are a little small, and the forearm needs more width. Its Tifa so I won't even bother with a comment about breast proportions. xD
As for the shading, the red on the skin looks more on the side of sunburn then the blush you were aiming for.
The background is lacking, I would recommend putting the horizon line at eye level with your character, or at her waist level if you still want a dynamic up shot. Where it is now doesn't conform to the perspective used on the figure.
Shading on the background: While gradients are nice to set a general mood, I would not recommend them for a final picture. Perhaps start with one and flesh it out with your own shading.

Good Luck,
Hope this helps.

Philmiranda responds:

Thanks for all your advice! It's so rare to get useful advice on this site...but I'll get some good use out of all that! Like I said, this was a little old so my drawing has improved since then, but you make some very valid criticisms. I'll admit that the background was a last-minute addition, and I also think it is EXTREMELY lacking. I'm not much good with background-type things yet. I'll be sure to work on my skin tones for next time as well. Thanks again for all the advice!

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